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Comment from adewpearl
Great pairing of humorous photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like the alliteration in cunning cat/crying
and the use of smash as a strong action verb
Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Great pairing of humorous photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like the alliteration in cunning cat/crying
and the use of smash as a strong action verb
Brooke
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments as always:)
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I am pleased you liked it. I appreciate your comments.
Thank you for this lovely review!
Comment from Selina Stambi
Loved this!
You're getting very good at this form, Anupam. Not sure how I missed it!
Have a great week, "sir"!
Sonali
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Loved this!
You're getting very good at this form, Anupam. Not sure how I missed it!
Have a great week, "sir"!
Sonali
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments as always:)
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I am pleased you liked it.
Thank you for this lovely review!
Comment from Jade Lawson
ahah funny picture and very appropriate for this prompt. Not sure if in reality the dog would go away crying, though :)
Very entertaining and well developed using the right syllable count.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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ahah funny picture and very appropriate for this prompt. Not sure if in reality the dog would go away crying, though :)
Very entertaining and well developed using the right syllable count.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments as always:)
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Anupam,
I relate to this piece extremely, having owned a ninja cat myself. She absolutely hated dogs and would attack at a drop of a hat. I love the cool, collected expression on the cats face,..."like shooting fish in a barrel." Lol. Nice job, Bill
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Hello Anupam,
I relate to this piece extremely, having owned a ninja cat myself. She absolutely hated dogs and would attack at a drop of a hat. I love the cool, collected expression on the cats face,..."like shooting fish in a barrel." Lol. Nice job, Bill
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Hi,
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments as always:)
How are you now?
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Hello Anupam, I'm well, thanks for asking. My knee is doing as well as it can. To tell you the truth, I'm enjoying my reprieve. I really wasn't quite prepared around my house to be down that long. Things are coming together now,...I hope you have a wonerful weekend, Bill
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a good 5-7-5 poem about a cat for the writing prompt. It is the correct syllable count. Good luck in the contest.~Teresa~
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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This is a good 5-7-5 poem about a cat for the writing prompt. It is the correct syllable count. Good luck in the contest.~Teresa~
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments :)
Comment from SueZen
Miaaaaw-haha(the cat in me laughs) & Howl-auwwww (the dog in me cries)
Lovely light hearted poem, makes me laugh out loud, smashing !
Good photo too to complement poem.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Miaaaaw-haha(the cat in me laughs) & Howl-auwwww (the dog in me cries)
Lovely light hearted poem, makes me laugh out loud, smashing !
Good photo too to complement poem.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments as always:)
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Now that is a fast cat..... aren't they hilarious..... He really is getting after that huge dog with absolute glee. Your sylable count, subject and execution of the 5-7-5 is superb. Good luck, Carolyn
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Now that is a fast cat..... aren't they hilarious..... He really is getting after that huge dog with absolute glee. Your sylable count, subject and execution of the 5-7-5 is superb. Good luck, Carolyn
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review and wishes:)
Comment from Sasha
This is excellent. Most people are unaware that a cat can do considerable damage to a dog...most dogs don't know it either. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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This is excellent. Most people are unaware that a cat can do considerable damage to a dog...most dogs don't know it either. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Hi,
I agree with you...cats can damage too:). Thank you for the lovely review and wishes:)
Comment from marycec
Good use of assonance in,'cunning Ninja'. Like the juxtaposition of the cunning cat and the innocent dog.. The accompanying illustration is hilarious.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Good use of assonance in,'cunning Ninja'. Like the juxtaposition of the cunning cat and the innocent dog.. The accompanying illustration is hilarious.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review and wishes:)
Comment from emrpoems
cunning Ninja cat
smashes dog's innocent face
He goes home crying
Perfect syllable count of 5-7-5 makes this a god entry to the 5-7-5 about a cat writing prompt entry
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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cunning Ninja cat
smashes dog's innocent face
He goes home crying
Perfect syllable count of 5-7-5 makes this a god entry to the 5-7-5 about a cat writing prompt entry
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review and wishes!