Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the myth of the unicorns. I had horses most of my life. They are unicorns with out the horns. They are both gentle and magical creature. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Ellie! :)

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

This would make a great greeting card. I wish the unicorn would sprinkle a bit of magic over the area where I live. We have a thin coat of ice, but after reading this I see sparkles. Best wishes with your entry.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Jean! :)

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A well-penned fantasy, 5-7-5 poetry;
Good visual imagery complement the mythical creature in its beautiful environment;
Nice alliteration also.
Excellent!
Not many Fanstorians write of mythology-I enjoyed your topic greatly.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much! :)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Compellingly paired picture and poem.
Strict structure 5-7-5 syllable count has been observed.
Good use of alliteration with silver-light serenades
Strong entry in this contest. Good luck

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Erica! :)

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a distinctly magical feel to this nuanced 5-7-5 poem exuding mystery and wonder among the 'moonlit woods'together with the alliterative effect

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Zanya! :)