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5/7/5 poems

5 total reviews 
Comment from NicciFaye
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Excellent presentation and creation. I love the second line of spreading shade across the hushed creek..a beautiful thought and complimentary sight.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Millibrad
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Your poem beautifully captures the pastoral aura of the painting. It is a worthy entry for this contest. Good luck and thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
    Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from adewpearl
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beautiful presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
vivid descriptive detail that creates a hushed, peaceful mood most effectively :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
    Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from Domino 2
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You convey the 'peace' theme extremely well in this tranquil and vivid contest entry.

Good 's' alliteration and sounds throughout which remind me of 'huSH'.

Good luck, Ted

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
    Thank you for this lovely review, Ted. Glad you enjoyed this. :)
Comment from aagalloway
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You've painted a beautiful scene and complimented it with an equally beautiful painting. Well done on a great contest entry and good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
    Thank you for this lovely review.