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5/7/5 poems

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Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. Muses will not wreck a good working relationship by adding sex to it. If you do it, takes away the impact of the written word. Muses are to help you stir others imaginations. Not yours. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for the excellent review once again. :)
Comment from wordsmatter2me
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I like the use of bodacious in the words that you write.
I like the photo for it's funny that scratching our heads makes the perfect creative muse.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for the lovely review. :)
Comment from daniela.albu
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This poem should have chances in the contest because it brings a touch of self-irony and humor while the artwork fully complements its words.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for the lovely review. :)
Comment from RodG
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I love the word "bodacious" which always brings back images of Dick Van Dyke talking/singing in "Mary Poppins." It also sets the TONE for this 5-7-5 beautifully.
Good personification of this Muse who seems to be a fickle lover.
And the slightly serious side as the Speaker can't understand why HE's ignored.
Indeed you made me smile! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for the lovely review. :)