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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Black Swan - Nina's Perfection"5/7/5 poems
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Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
dancing was her dream--
marred with illusion's black web
fatal perfection
If Aronofsky had done a "Center Stage" and used an actual dancer in the lead then the whole premise of a person mentally degenerating wouldn't have worked/been as effective as it did with an accomplished actress like Portman.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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dancing was her dream--
marred with illusion's black web
fatal perfection
If Aronofsky had done a "Center Stage" and used an actual dancer in the lead then the whole premise of a person mentally degenerating wouldn't have worked/been as effective as it did with an accomplished actress like Portman.
Regards:
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from TAB_that's me
I'm not familiar with this movie but your 5-7-5 poem is in perfect form for the writing prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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I'm not familiar with this movie but your 5-7-5 poem is in perfect form for the writing prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the review.