Plead
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Comment from sunnilicious
This is a good entry. Well thought out and clearly written. Good S-word alliteration. I like the presentation. Nice work. Also, you met the contest requirements. Good luck in the 2-4-6 Contest.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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This is a good entry. Well thought out and clearly written. Good S-word alliteration. I like the presentation. Nice work. Also, you met the contest requirements. Good luck in the 2-4-6 Contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 2-4-6 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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This is a very well written 2-4-6 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the read and the kind words.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
There is just something of quietness and time alone. My husband and I work at the same place but we work in different areas. Then we come home and he does his thing and I do mine and at the end we come together and talk for awhile before bed. It's the perfect balance because we're both able to have our own time to just be. I don't know how people function being around people all the time 24/7. Like when do they recharge?
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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There is just something of quietness and time alone. My husband and I work at the same place but we work in different areas. Then we come home and he does his thing and I do mine and at the end we come together and talk for awhile before bed. It's the perfect balance because we're both able to have our own time to just be. I don't know how people function being around people all the time 24/7. Like when do they recharge?
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the read and sharing. What a beautiful ritual you and your husband have. You have found balance and that is the answer to a happy life. Unfortunately, I had to change the wording to make all three lines rhyme. This necessitated a title change from Blessing to Plead.