The Unmasking
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Comment from sunnilicious
I clicked thru online and bought a collection last night. Life has changed dramatically in a matter of a few months. I pray life goes back to normal, but it may take a while. Excellent work. Nice :)
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I clicked thru online and bought a collection last night. Life has changed dramatically in a matter of a few months. I pray life goes back to normal, but it may take a while. Excellent work. Nice :)
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I have developed a real hate relationship with my 2 masks.
May get some disposables.
Thanks for the nice comment.
Comment from Diana Kane
I love the literal and metaphorical use of the word mask in all it's forms here. I think this is what we all want. I think that feeling comes across in this piece. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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I love the literal and metaphorical use of the word mask in all it's forms here. I think this is what we all want. I think that feeling comes across in this piece. Great job!
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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thanks! I see you're a new member. welcome to FS.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, it doesn't do any good anyway... :) :) :) A fun offering for the contest and definitely on point for the topic -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Yeah, it doesn't do any good anyway... :) :) :) A fun offering for the contest and definitely on point for the topic -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks, Y.M. (just kidding)
thanks, Yvette.
I can wish, can't I?
Are you out of school yet? :)
mysterious unnamed
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Yes!! I officially answered my last email regarding final grades day before yesterday (because I'm not taking any more!!) -- I am done... no, let's be honest about this year: I am SO D-O-N-E!! ;) :) Thanx for asking, mysterious unnamed -- be sure to pop in and say hi when you find your name (or at least when it's not so mysterious)... LOL! ;) :) Take care out there!! ;) Yvette
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yessum. I'm is. (careful out there)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This was SO fun! I thought I knew where you were going when I first started to read, and you surprised me completely. *smile*
(THAT wasn't a real surprise, though - I do have a very weird brain. If you'd managed to go where I went, I would have to worry about you.)
This was tight, sharp, and well-written. The rhymes were great!
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This was SO fun! I thought I knew where you were going when I first started to read, and you surprised me completely. *smile*
(THAT wasn't a real surprise, though - I do have a very weird brain. If you'd managed to go where I went, I would have to worry about you.)
This was tight, sharp, and well-written. The rhymes were great!
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks, Robyn.
Of course, YOU HAVE PIQUED MY CURIOSITY!!!!
(and I have a weird brain,too) (which is going fast)
Comment from ESOSTINE
We are all truly looking forward to that moment of freedom when will be free again to follow our choices and live normal life again. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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We are all truly looking forward to that moment of freedom when will be free again to follow our choices and live normal life again. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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and breath unhindered. :)
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I appreciated this as a poem and also as accurate Covic commentary. I think you did a really nice job with the topic. I resonate with every word of this poem.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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I appreciated this as a poem and also as accurate Covic commentary. I think you did a really nice job with the topic. I resonate with every word of this poem.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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thanks, Amanda. I appreciate that!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
But with the "unmasking" that's going on
It would suit me just fine if "they"
Would make a pronouncement, insisting that I
Be promptly unmasked, today!
Not going to happen my friend, in Alberta the government decided to make them mandatory at the end of the month. There are lots of countries where if you are caught without it, you are charged.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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But with the "unmasking" that's going on
It would suit me just fine if "they"
Would make a pronouncement, insisting that I
Be promptly unmasked, today!
Not going to happen my friend, in Alberta the government decided to make them mandatory at the end of the month. There are lots of countries where if you are caught without it, you are charged.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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wishful thinking here! I understand wearing them inside places, but they are hot and muggy and I would think that wet condition would enable, not prevent,the virus. So sayeth I, the non-scientist.