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Need for a little more exercise.
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Comment from
tfawcus
I guess that half the fun of this contest is in trying to guess who the author is. Those of us who are tall do have a bit of an advantage when it comes to that swift calculation they do in the doctor's surgery. It sounds as though your short in stature but stand tall in self-deprecating humour - a much better measure of a person!
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
Thank you so for your read and review. You are correct about my stature short is my due.
Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Good artwork.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The imagery is effective
as you describe these "statistics."
-Keep working on that exercise,
and good luck in the contest:)
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
Yeah, exercise. For a time I subscribed to Robert Maynard Hutchins, President of the University of Chicago when he said upon dropping football- "When I feel the urge to exercise I lie down until it passes." However, I have come to believe his advice was wrong.
reply by Pam (respa) on 28-May-2020
Thanks for sharing; I don't think it was good advice, either.
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