A Crown of Heroic Sonnets
Poetry Contest
Let's revive the heroic times of the Crown of Heroic Sonnets!
I hosted this contest two years ago which produced remarkable works, some of which are in the honorary archives of this site. This year God whispered in my ear that I should do it again; if you are up for it.
This is a tremendous challenge which does require a lot of work, and not the one for those with a short attention span. But it is an achievement which elevates one's poetry to the next level. So, for those serious poets who are willing to try it again, or attempt it for the first time, here it is:
What exactly is the Crown of Heroic sonnets?
The Crown of heroic sonnets is a sequence of seven heroic sonnets usually addressed to one person. It is concerned with a single theme and each sonnet explores a different aspect of the theme and is linked to the preceding and succeeding sonnets by repeating the final line of the preceding sonnet as its first line and by having its final line be the first line of the succeeding sonnet.
The first line of the first sonnet is repeated as the final line of the final sonnet thereby bringing the sequence to a close.
NO REPEAT RHYMES ARE ALLOWED EXCEPT IN THE LINKING OF EACH SONNET.
The Crown consists of seven Heroic sonnets. What is a Heroic sonnet?
The Heroic Sonnet is an iambic pentameter based poem that adds a heroic couplet to either two Sicilian octave stanzas or four Sicilian quatrain stanzas. In other words, it's eighteen lines of iambic pentameter broken into three or five parts with the last part being a couplet. The rhyme scheme has usually been a,b,a,b,a,b,a,b - c,d,c,d,c,d,c,d - e,e OR a,b,a,b - c,d,c,d - e,f,e,f - g,h,g,h - i,i.
Grand Final
(Heroic Sonnet)
A packed arena- thousands watch the fight
these revered gladiators now unfold;
the sun is warm, it is still early night
as the combatants enter; eyes behold
bold rippling muscles- minds are set to win.
Their dedication's tangible, it thrills
spectators' tribal instincts- let's begin!
The first hit is a winner, shows off skills
honed fine in years of agonizing pain-
the sculpted bodies, bronzed like statued gods,
advance, retreat; strike fast- and hit again.
When all seems lost- advantage changes odds,
the crowd is yelling fiercely, urging on
two tired fighters, on the bright green field;
the sun has set- the early bets foregone,
all eyes are riveted on who will yield.
The final break is there, the last ball's served-
it is a top-spin lob- in beauty curved.
Copyright Leny Roovers
30-1-2005
An iambic foot is an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable. We could write the rhythm like this:
da DUM
A line of iambic pentameter is five iambic feet in a row:
da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM
Here is an example from Kaff-Kaff's poem "The Romantic Era". Kaff was a member here who created the original Crown challenge.
This / IS / my / SOUL'S / con / CEP / tion / OF / a / PRAISE
da / DUM / da / DUM / da / DUM / da / DUM / da / DUM
The higher entry fee is due to the magnitude of this challenge.
And this is my own rendition of the form:
STAGES OF LOVE
I.
When child is born, love starts with mother's milk
The nurturing and care, a cherub's bliss
Your cheeks are pink and skin as soft as silk,
baptized with tears of joy and mother's kiss.
The rays of sun bring glow upon your face
awakening the worldly joys and fire
Sweet angel, may the finest Brussels lace
protect you from the harm of fortune's ire.
The infancy now gone, you start to talk,
Your tongue caressing vowels on the sly
On playground lawn you learn a firmer walk,
your sparkling laugh sends bubbles to the sky.
You blossom every day, a cherry tree
The angulars give room to rounder form
Delight to mom and dad, your friends and me
In tender hearts you start to cause a storm.
From duckling to a swan of grace and flair
Those happy days, devoid of grief or care.
II.
Those happy days, devoid of grief or care,
the adolescence, what a rampant lot -
Your dreams begin to drift where eagles dare,
the tantrums set propriety at naught.
You like to play with wholesome pink-cheeked girl
The seeds of love are sown, the soul is doomed,
your neighbor's daughter, with the bobbing curls
To you she is the Eden rose in bloom.
How innocent those games with hidden fires
Two souls akin, the world a blank page still
But cunning little goblins called desire
are creeping in your loins, and blood they chill.
You start to get in trouble more and more
The world's your oyster, gladiator, Mars
The depths of earth determined to explore
or flying in your spaceship to the stars.
Fate dumps you or it drops its parachute
The fortune fireworks cracking their salute.
III.
The fortune fireworks cracking their salute.
Your oats are wild, your demons not at bay
Your sweetheart loves the soft bells of your flute
and prays to Virgin that you never stray.
The passion's flow consumes, the air is filled
with longing too delicious to resist
The goblet with the potion never chilled
on nightstand, is your reason to exist.
Two lovers spent by lust, in sweet denial
they drink from goblet full of perfect lies
Though lethal could be love's endangered vial
and painful its heartbreaking brisk good-byes.
Yet lovers drink the madness to the brim,
they bear their sweet illusions jaded cross
Oh love, you are the niche of the extreme
and fatal is your devastating loss.
How sharp you are, the thorns of perfect rose
Oh, love's best part is poetry, not prose...
IV.
Oh, love's best part is poetry, not prose
A youth becomes a man and he's in love
with golden haired abundant perfect rose
The angels seem to smile at him above.
Alas, she toys with his illusive heart
hers given to another long ago
His mind ablaze, his soul is torn apart
unable to withstand the crushing blow.
Those sleepless horrid nights on crumpled sheets
His tear ducts dry from flooding overuse
A nagging word that tears his brain - deceit!
The Don Quixote's windmills, it's no use.
Decision's made, no tears, the dice is cast.
He challenges his rival to a duel
His inner storms, his rage are unsurpassed
He curses her for being dense and cruel.
The weapon chosen - pistol over sword
The rival's death would be his sweet reward.
V.
The rival's death would be his sweet reward.
Comes sunrise - forest ground is white with snow
The death fight for a myth they both adored
There is one truth that two opponents know -
she wasn't worth it - but it is too late.
Their weapons raised and leveled at the wrist
The winter trees foresee the scream of fate,
The deadly smoke is breaking sunrise mist.
The pistol shot sends echo to the sky
One duelist dead, the other clings to life.
The woods will always hear a woman's cry
that pierced the morning stillness like a knife
The snowy forest ground is full of blood
of poor deluded youth who paid the price;
The fallacy of love killed in the bud
for shallow virgin with a heart of ice.
Oh love, you're nothing but a big sweet lie
To woman's viles the dead man said good-bye.
VI.
To woman's viles the dead man said good-bye
The debt of honor paid, but what a cost...
Cold January turned to warm July
A life, so innocent, forever lost.
Our duelist doomed to many years abroad
The dice of fortune, once again, are tossed
Oh, woman's heart, who said you never lie?
The lives, the minds irrevocably lost.
Our star crossed lover is exiled to Rome
Forlorn and bitter, he denounced all hope
Alone, so many miles away from home
He feels he's near the end of his thin rope.
Our lovely maiden cried for three long months
the loss of her beloved in the duel;
A handsome hussar took her off her trance
and whisked away his weeping army jewel.
I ask you - what is life? A game of chance
Kaleidoscope of love's gone wrong romance.
VII.
Kaleidoscope of love's gone wrong romance
What happened to our hero? He survived
the disappointment and his long lost chance
Time's known to be best healer; fates contrived
to find another for his love and lust
A flaming red haired widow his consort;
Two broken hearts, two raging fires combust
His suffering at end, she holds his court.
On bended knee he asked her for her hand
He knew at last the treasure that was real -
He searched forever for the promised land
and finally, fate ended his ordeal.
The church bells echoed angels' gentle voice
Bride's gown was made of fine Venetian lace,
Their gentle daughter born, they named her Joyce
With charming dimples on her baby face.
Her cheeks were pink, and hair as soft as silk
When child is born, love starts with mother's milk.
Copyright @ 2009 Yelena Teleshova
The contest winner will win half of the prize pool which is based on the number of entries. The second and third place winners will each share the remaining prize pool. The prize pool is currently 375.00 member dollars. There are only 3 spots still open. If all open spots are used the prize pool will be 450.00 member dollars. In this contest at least 2 submissions must be made for the vote to begin.
Deadline: Contest is closed. Deadline was Thursday, March 15, 2012.
Full Contest Listing
I hosted this contest two years ago which produced remarkable works, some of which are in the honorary archives of this site. This year God whispered in my ear that I should do it again; if you are up for it.
This is a tremendous challenge which does require a lot of work, and not the one for those with a short attention span. But it is an achievement which elevates one's poetry to the next level. So, for those serious poets who are willing to try it again, or attempt it for the first time, here it is:
What exactly is the Crown of Heroic sonnets?
The Crown of heroic sonnets is a sequence of seven heroic sonnets usually addressed to one person. It is concerned with a single theme and each sonnet explores a different aspect of the theme and is linked to the preceding and succeeding sonnets by repeating the final line of the preceding sonnet as its first line and by having its final line be the first line of the succeeding sonnet.
The first line of the first sonnet is repeated as the final line of the final sonnet thereby bringing the sequence to a close.
NO REPEAT RHYMES ARE ALLOWED EXCEPT IN THE LINKING OF EACH SONNET.
The Crown consists of seven Heroic sonnets. What is a Heroic sonnet?
The Heroic Sonnet is an iambic pentameter based poem that adds a heroic couplet to either two Sicilian octave stanzas or four Sicilian quatrain stanzas. In other words, it's eighteen lines of iambic pentameter broken into three or five parts with the last part being a couplet. The rhyme scheme has usually been a,b,a,b,a,b,a,b - c,d,c,d,c,d,c,d - e,e OR a,b,a,b - c,d,c,d - e,f,e,f - g,h,g,h - i,i.
Grand Final
(Heroic Sonnet)
A packed arena- thousands watch the fight
these revered gladiators now unfold;
the sun is warm, it is still early night
as the combatants enter; eyes behold
bold rippling muscles- minds are set to win.
Their dedication's tangible, it thrills
spectators' tribal instincts- let's begin!
The first hit is a winner, shows off skills
honed fine in years of agonizing pain-
the sculpted bodies, bronzed like statued gods,
advance, retreat; strike fast- and hit again.
When all seems lost- advantage changes odds,
the crowd is yelling fiercely, urging on
two tired fighters, on the bright green field;
the sun has set- the early bets foregone,
all eyes are riveted on who will yield.
The final break is there, the last ball's served-
it is a top-spin lob- in beauty curved.
Copyright Leny Roovers
30-1-2005
An iambic foot is an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable. We could write the rhythm like this:
da DUM
A line of iambic pentameter is five iambic feet in a row:
da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM
Here is an example from Kaff-Kaff's poem "The Romantic Era". Kaff was a member here who created the original Crown challenge.
This / IS / my / SOUL'S / con / CEP / tion / OF / a / PRAISE
da / DUM / da / DUM / da / DUM / da / DUM / da / DUM
The higher entry fee is due to the magnitude of this challenge.
And this is my own rendition of the form:
I.
When child is born, love starts with mother's milk
The nurturing and care, a cherub's bliss
Your cheeks are pink and skin as soft as silk,
baptized with tears of joy and mother's kiss.
The rays of sun bring glow upon your face
awakening the worldly joys and fire
Sweet angel, may the finest Brussels lace
protect you from the harm of fortune's ire.
The infancy now gone, you start to talk,
Your tongue caressing vowels on the sly
On playground lawn you learn a firmer walk,
your sparkling laugh sends bubbles to the sky.
You blossom every day, a cherry tree
The angulars give room to rounder form
Delight to mom and dad, your friends and me
In tender hearts you start to cause a storm.
From duckling to a swan of grace and flair
Those happy days, devoid of grief or care.
II.
Those happy days, devoid of grief or care,
the adolescence, what a rampant lot -
Your dreams begin to drift where eagles dare,
the tantrums set propriety at naught.
You like to play with wholesome pink-cheeked girl
The seeds of love are sown, the soul is doomed,
your neighbor's daughter, with the bobbing curls
To you she is the Eden rose in bloom.
How innocent those games with hidden fires
Two souls akin, the world a blank page still
But cunning little goblins called desire
are creeping in your loins, and blood they chill.
You start to get in trouble more and more
The world's your oyster, gladiator, Mars
The depths of earth determined to explore
or flying in your spaceship to the stars.
Fate dumps you or it drops its parachute
The fortune fireworks cracking their salute.
III.
The fortune fireworks cracking their salute.
Your oats are wild, your demons not at bay
Your sweetheart loves the soft bells of your flute
and prays to Virgin that you never stray.
The passion's flow consumes, the air is filled
with longing too delicious to resist
The goblet with the potion never chilled
on nightstand, is your reason to exist.
Two lovers spent by lust, in sweet denial
they drink from goblet full of perfect lies
Though lethal could be love's endangered vial
and painful its heartbreaking brisk good-byes.
Yet lovers drink the madness to the brim,
they bear their sweet illusions jaded cross
Oh love, you are the niche of the extreme
and fatal is your devastating loss.
How sharp you are, the thorns of perfect rose
Oh, love's best part is poetry, not prose...
IV.
Oh, love's best part is poetry, not prose
A youth becomes a man and he's in love
with golden haired abundant perfect rose
The angels seem to smile at him above.
Alas, she toys with his illusive heart
hers given to another long ago
His mind ablaze, his soul is torn apart
unable to withstand the crushing blow.
Those sleepless horrid nights on crumpled sheets
His tear ducts dry from flooding overuse
A nagging word that tears his brain - deceit!
The Don Quixote's windmills, it's no use.
Decision's made, no tears, the dice is cast.
He challenges his rival to a duel
His inner storms, his rage are unsurpassed
He curses her for being dense and cruel.
The weapon chosen - pistol over sword
The rival's death would be his sweet reward.
V.
The rival's death would be his sweet reward.
Comes sunrise - forest ground is white with snow
The death fight for a myth they both adored
There is one truth that two opponents know -
she wasn't worth it - but it is too late.
Their weapons raised and leveled at the wrist
The winter trees foresee the scream of fate,
The deadly smoke is breaking sunrise mist.
The pistol shot sends echo to the sky
One duelist dead, the other clings to life.
The woods will always hear a woman's cry
that pierced the morning stillness like a knife
The snowy forest ground is full of blood
of poor deluded youth who paid the price;
The fallacy of love killed in the bud
for shallow virgin with a heart of ice.
Oh love, you're nothing but a big sweet lie
To woman's viles the dead man said good-bye.
VI.
To woman's viles the dead man said good-bye
The debt of honor paid, but what a cost...
Cold January turned to warm July
A life, so innocent, forever lost.
Our duelist doomed to many years abroad
The dice of fortune, once again, are tossed
Oh, woman's heart, who said you never lie?
The lives, the minds irrevocably lost.
Our star crossed lover is exiled to Rome
Forlorn and bitter, he denounced all hope
Alone, so many miles away from home
He feels he's near the end of his thin rope.
Our lovely maiden cried for three long months
the loss of her beloved in the duel;
A handsome hussar took her off her trance
and whisked away his weeping army jewel.
I ask you - what is life? A game of chance
Kaleidoscope of love's gone wrong romance.
VII.
Kaleidoscope of love's gone wrong romance
What happened to our hero? He survived
the disappointment and his long lost chance
Time's known to be best healer; fates contrived
to find another for his love and lust
A flaming red haired widow his consort;
Two broken hearts, two raging fires combust
His suffering at end, she holds his court.
On bended knee he asked her for her hand
He knew at last the treasure that was real -
He searched forever for the promised land
and finally, fate ended his ordeal.
The church bells echoed angels' gentle voice
Bride's gown was made of fine Venetian lace,
Their gentle daughter born, they named her Joyce
With charming dimples on her baby face.
Her cheeks were pink, and hair as soft as silk
When child is born, love starts with mother's milk.
Copyright @ 2009 Yelena Teleshova
The contest winner will win half of the prize pool which is based on the number of entries. The second and third place winners will each share the remaining prize pool. The prize pool is currently 375.00 member dollars. There are only 3 spots still open. If all open spots are used the prize pool will be 450.00 member dollars. In this contest at least 2 submissions must be made for the vote to begin.
Deadline: Contest is closed. Deadline was Thursday, March 15, 2012.
