By Jim Wile
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Those of you who've read my previous novels know that they have all concerned the game of golf. This one does not. This is my first draft and I will be writing it as I post it. Being primarily a "pantser," I only have the vaguest details of the plot currently worked out. As always, I appreciate all input, and sometimes your story ideas make it into the story. Feel free to fire away.
CHARACTERS David Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 26-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Plymouth, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches. Susanna (Suzie) Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy. Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 26-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Plymouth, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Susanna (Suzie) Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Diane Delaney: David's ex-girlfriend |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
Chapter 3 is almost 2,400 words long, so I broke it up into 3A and 3B, which will be posted on Wednesday.
CHARACTERS David Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 26-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Susanna (Suzie) Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Diane Delaney: David's ex-girlfriend |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 26-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Susanna (Suzie) Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Diane Delaney: David's ex-girlfriend |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 26-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Susanna (Suzie) Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Diane Delaney: David's ex-girlfriend |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Susanna (Suzie) Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Diane Delaney: David's ex-girlfriend |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Susanna (Suzie) Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Diane Delaney: David's ex-girlfriend |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a neighbor who lives on Loser Street. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a neighbor who lives on Loser Street. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Tony Armand: Tina Cassidy's boyfriend and the father of her baby. He is a star football player at Grove Park High. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Tony Armand: Tina Cassidy's boyfriend and the father of her baby. He is a star football player at Grove Park High. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Tony Armand: Tina Cassidy's boyfriend and the father of her baby. He is a star football player at Grove Park High. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Tony Armand: Tina Cassidy's boyfriend and the father of her baby. He is a star football player at Grove Park High. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Tony Armand: Tina Cassidy's boyfriend and the father of her baby. He is a star football player at Grove Park High. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Tony Armand: Tina Cassidy's boyfriend and the father of her baby. He is a star football player at Grove Park High. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
David (later Alan) Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Earl Pinkham: The principal of Grove Park High School where David teaches Suzie Cassidy: The school secretary and mother of Tina Cassidy Tina Cassidy: A 16-year-old high school sophomore in David Phelps's class Bobby Harken: David's friend and fellow teacher Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Tony Armand: Tina Cassidy's boyfriend and the father of her baby. He is a star football player at Grove Park High. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. |
By Jim Wile
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When I began writing this story, I had no idea this invention actually exists today. I had told my brother about the story, and he said he thought there was something like it. I hadn't found it when I first started researching it, but further research revealed that a device called the OrCam MyEye was invented in 2010, which does exactly what this device does. A video of the OrCam MyEye can be found at:
https://cdn.commercev3.net/www.maxiaids.com/downloads/media/OrCam%20MyEye%20IntroEN.mp4 And here I thought I had invented it for the story! Just goes to show you that it's easy enough to conceive of an invention, but another thing entirely to actually make one that works. Let's see if Alan can do it in 1986. CHARACTERS Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
Those of you who read my novel Some Call It Luck will remember Abby as one of the two main characters. In a subsequent draft of that novel, this scene became the first chapter of the story. Abby also was a minor character in Saving Mr. Calvin where she had become Abby Payne after marrying Kenny Payne.
CHARACTERS Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
I promise no more tech-speak after this. I thought we just needed to see the two nerds discussing things together to establish their bona fides for a bit of realism.
CHARACTERS Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. Wilson Fraleigh: The owner and president of the company that bought the patent from Warren. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. Wilson Fraleigh: The owner and president of the company that bought the patent from Warren. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. Wilson Fraleigh: The owner and president of the company that bought the patent from Warren. Samuel Dvorak: Warren's former employer. Elizabeth Meyers: Warren's mother. Dennis Meyers: Warren's brother. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. Wilson Fraleigh: The owner and president of the company that bought the patent from Warren. Samuel Dvorak: Warren's former employer. Elizabeth Meyers: Warren's mother. Dennis Meyers: Warren's brother. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. Wilson Fraleigh: The owner and president of the company that bought the patent from Warren. Samuel Dvorak: Warren's former employer. Elizabeth Meyers: Warren's mother. Dennis Meyers: Warren's brother. Andrew Olafsen: Alan's new assistant at the store. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. Wilson Fraleigh: The owner and president of the company that bought the patent from Warren. Samuel Dvorak: Warren's former employer. Elizabeth Meyers: Warren's mother. Dennis Meyers: Warren's brother. Andrew Olafsen: Alan's new assistant at the store. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
CHARACTERS
Alan Phelps: The narrator of the story. He is a 28-year-old high school physics and natural science teacher in Grantham, Indiana in 1985. Archie: David's orange tabby cat Tommy Boardman: Alan's 12-year-old next door neighbor. He is dyslexic like Alan. Ginnie Boardman: Tommy's mother. She is 30 years old and is an ICU nurse. Artie Intintoli: Tommy's friend who also lives on Loser St. Ida Beeman: Alan's first customer. She is a nice old lady who lives on Loser Street. Leroy Beeman: Miss Ida's grandson and Tommy's friend. Mrs. Dunbar: Tommy's 7th grade English teacher. Callie Lyons: A nice girl in Tommy's class at school. Trent Lyons: Callie's father, who is a lawyer. Warren Meyers: Alan's assistant in the repair shop. Abby St. Claire: Callie's cousin who is a math major with an engineering minor at Penn State University. Harold Carmody: A patent and infringement attorney. Wilson Fraleigh: The owner and president of the company that bought the patent from Warren. Samuel Dvorak: Warren's former employer. Elizabeth Meyers: Warren's mother. Dennis Meyers: Warren's brother. Andrew Olafsen: Alan's new assistant at the store. |
By Jim Wile
Author Notes |
Many thanks to all who have been following this story. Your reviews and input have been invaluable in helping me improve it as each chapter was posted. I very much appreciate the time you took to read and review it. It was fun for me to see how you would anticipate some of the action to come, but I hope I was also able to surprise you a few times. In some cases, your ideas even sent me off in a new direction.
When I start a story, I only have a general idea of the theme and a vague idea of where the plot might go. I am more of a pantser (write by the seat of my pants), and the plot is largely determined by where the characters take me. At least until about halfway through, then I'm pretty sure where the story is going, and I will plot that out roughly. An important aspect of writing a novel is pacing--something you don't have to worry about as much with shorter works. It's a challenge to make each chapter interesting but yet not pack a lot of irrelevant action into the story that doesn't either support the theme or help in character development. When reading a chapter every few days, the way we do here at FanStory, you often find yourself wondering why a character acted a certain way, and you sometimes don't find out the answer until later. Often, in my responses to reviews, I would say, "Just wait; it will all become clear soon." In real life, hardly anyone reads a novel this way, so patience is a virtue. I've been posting this story for about four months, and it's not even a very long novel (69,000 words, or about 250 pages). But this makes me all the more appreciative of how you've hung in there, patiently awaited the next chapter, and been willing to accept the fact that the answers to your questions will likely be coming. I must continually remind myself to do the same when reading others' novels on FanStory. Thank you, dear friends, for giving me a forum to present this story and for the interest you showed in it. It was a very gratifying experience for me. Jim Wile |
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