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Four quatrains

A chapter in the book Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

When I was young

by JLR

When I was young the lilac fragrance exploded
into the air for two weeks every spring while
the purple blooms on every branch were overloaded
as the daytime sun danced on the lake, making me smile.

When I was young, we gathered for the family meal
precisely at six p.m. Sitting tall with hands washed,
heads bent ready to bless the meal with not one squeal
we knew that mom, busy as a bee, simply noshed.

When I was young we seldom sat idle and foolishly prattled
'twas chores done first, books cracked next, bedtime vespers
said with gladness of heart for the just past day. Rattled,
not one whit, off into sleep we'd go, listening for angel whispers.

When I was young life seemed much less hectic, more simple
Neighborhoods were secure, playgrounds safe, subways securer
Two houses down, a young sweet lass smiled showing a dimple.
I smiled back with a friendly nod hoping ... just to reassure her,

When I was young ... she was young too.



The Past writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a rhyming poem that starts with

When I was young and ......


Write a rhyming poem using: When I was young

abab/cdcd/efef/ghgh


Noshed: to eat lightly
Prattled: talk at length in a foolish or inconsequential way.
Vespers: evening prayers
Rattled: thrown into a state of agitated confusion
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