| Humor Fiction posted May 6, 2022 |
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Yes, I made ...
The escape ...
by Wendy G
My head is down. I can't look.
It's a claustrophobic experience. I feel trapped.
It's dizzying. Am I moving? Impossible.
All sounds are distorted: the thumping, swishing, swirling, bumping, pushing.
Crushing arms approach. I need to escape!
My vision is now blurred, my heart is racing, my head aches.
How long? Time is not moving.
Lights keep flashing, warning. I make my escape. My time was not over! But I don't care!
I drive out of the automatic car wash.
80 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
My head is down. I can't look.
It's a claustrophobic experience. I feel trapped.
It's dizzying. Am I moving? Impossible.
All sounds are distorted: the thumping, swishing, swirling, bumping, pushing.
Crushing arms approach. I need to escape!
My vision is now blurred, my heart is racing, my head aches.
How long? Time is not moving.
Lights keep flashing, warning. I make my escape. My time was not over! But I don't care!
I drive out of the automatic car wash.
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Writing Prompt Write a story of 80 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 80 words. |
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(80 words according to the FS site, and my count also).
I think I missed the last bit of the car wash experience!
Some true, some fiction, some exaggerated for the purpose of the story!
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and 2 member cents. I think I missed the last bit of the car wash experience!
Some true, some fiction, some exaggerated for the purpose of the story!
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