Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 16, 2022


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You can't turn a truck in a corridor

My Sonnet Rhymes

by Fleedleflump



My sonnet rhymes on axes X and Y,
Yet deferential dreams are hard to grasp.
So, poetry can give me wings to fly;
Oh, for a fanfare’s inspiration’s blast!
 
No more, will forms compress the written word,
Nor rules dictate the subjects I release.
Emancipation! Let their cry be heard.
To fold a page is to create a crease,
 
Removing shape like ladders from below -
He was a window cleaner until then,
Yet now he’s just a climber, there to show
My power to control his fate’s demesne.
 
Eloping from the rules can set us free,
So revel in this rebel’s rampant glee!



 



Rhyming Acrostic Contest writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Please write a rhyming acrostic poem.


This was inspired by an analogy I thought of - you can't turn a truck in a corridor. In other words, if you constrain something too much, you'll prevent an obvious solution.

So I applied it cheekily to poetic form.

Please note - demesne is pronounced 'de-men' and describes a ruled-over domain or holding
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