General Fiction posted April 29, 2024


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I am Dave

by Bill Schott

"Cleo felt she was losing her mind, said Claude.

What are you doing, Cleo? asked Dave.

I'm narrating my life, Dave -- obviously. 

Well, okay. So, who is Claude?  

He has the speaking role as I tell my story.

So, you are Claude, telling Cleo’s story.

Yes – and -- I am Dave.”





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The quotation marks are not wrong. They indicate that everything is being said by Dave.
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