General Poetry posted May 16, 2024


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
When thinking becomes intrusive

Head Rush

by Kelly Louisa Balliu

Thoughts

Pile up like traffic

Hurtling around bends;

Demanding unwanted attention


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