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Gogyohka Poem

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

Sleepy Head

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
While I overslept,
 
dew kissed the flowers

as they followed the sun

and sparrows sang love songs.

Morning miracles marched on

without my sleepy head.



 

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Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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