Romance Poetry posted November 14, 2024 Chapters:  ...251 252 -253- 254... 


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Senryu Suite and Katauta Poem
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Do You Even Care

by Gypsy Blue Rose


fictional Love poem. Poems and Presentation by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright

This night!  

the starless sky stirs remembrance

as the wind moans

.

and once again, 

for the  trillionth time,

winter’s veil covers the land. 

.

The space between us

chills my bones 

and spears my heart.

.

Do you even care?

I must be delusional 

to think we’re in love.

.

I’ll scream in despair

in this dark vacuous night

lost in a turbulent sea.

 

 
 
 




vacuous = empty
remembrance = memories

Katauta is an unrhymed 8th-century Japanese poem consisting of 19 syllables with a 5/7/7 pattern. A pair of katauta is called a sedoka. The form was used for poems addressed to a lover like tanka. click here for more info

SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules

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Gypsy

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