Mystery and Crime Poetry posted August 9, 2008 |
Patterned after The Midnight Ride of Paul Revere
A Woman Scorned
by Rdfrdmom2
My apologies to Longfellow
Look, fanstorians, and you will read About the warnings she did not heed When racing down that treacherous wet mountain lane Acting as if truly insane Searching for he who did the dirty deed. She got home early that fateful morning What she found nearly tore her apart Her dreams shorn beyond repair without warning Leaving her penniless and a broken heart ~ He thought he would have two hours or three Head start before she found out, don’t you see? Besides, he felt she was just too weak To have the nerve to chase after him and seek Why he had left her without letting her speak. She picked herself up and got in her car Thinking, he could not have gone too far That bastard will truly rue the day He took my money and ran away If he thinks he’s seen me mad before He better be prepared for all out war When I’m done, he’ll be really sore It’s one body that will never be found He should have known not to run around. She floored the gas when she hit the street Imagining just where he might go The bitterness was beginning to grow She would not rest until she hunted him down As he made his cowardly retreat Her revenge would not be served cold and stale When she dealt him her get-even blow. She caught up with him on the old mountain road Just a few miles short of the state line Running ninety and drinking red wine Now in automatic pilot mode She was ready to show she could be tough For him, the fall-out would be rough Ramming into the back of his car Pushing him just a little too far Losing control, he went over the cliff When they found him, he was a cold stiff And she believed that was good enough. jbh 8-9-08 |
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By the way, I followed Longfellow's rhyme and syllable pattern. The rhyme pattern for the infamous Midnight Ride is:
aabba
cdcdeeffg
hhiijjjkk
lmmnlon
pqqprrssttr.
I stopped there because 41 lines was all my brain could muster. LOL!
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