Song Lyrics Poetry posted September 23, 2009


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Frank Sinatra style song

When Love Lies

by Helvi2


If your heart is aching
From a love that now is breaking,

Did love lie? 

If  your sweetheart loved you,  
And yet turned around to leave you,
Did love lie? 


When someone stops from caring
And their love disappears
That's when your heart starts tearing
Into a million tiers. 


If the pain you're feeling
Finds you with emotions reeling, 
Then love lied.

No hope in pretending
With the hope of ever mending,
If love died.. 


When someone stops from caring
And their love disappears
That's when your heart starts tearing
Into a million tiers


There's no happy ending
If love embers cease their tending,
Love's deprived.

When there's no mistaking
Of the final undertaking,
Love has lied. 


When someone stops from caring
And their love disappears
That's when your heart starts tearing
Into a million tears.

'Cause when the heart is aching
One feels that its breaking,

When love lies.




Write a Frank Sinatra styled song writing prompt entry
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Get into the spirit of the "Ol' Blue Eyes"

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