Writing Poetry posted May 4, 2010 Chapters:  ...27 28 -29- 30... 


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The road we travel

A chapter in the book Writings From the Heart

Life

by deepwater

Sadness is, the wish that you never achieve

Alone in the darkness, with dreams of reprieve

Too lazy to do what's within your own reach

But criticize others, on their fight to succeed

You have it within you, to reach and fly high

So remove your defenses, go reach for the sky

Go forward with gusto, show life what you are

The phoenix that rises, now claim your new start

Reach out for the hands that will pull you up high

Remember the past on this new path you fly

Real friends will stay, locked deep in your heart

So always remember the place that you start

GW



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