Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 2, 2013 |
Dedicated To My Sisters of The Hood...and the Brothers TOO
HONESTY...My Kinda Religion
by closetpoetjester
The author has placed a warning on this post for language.
HONESTY...My Kinda Religion
It's nice to tether bonds to those with backbone and some morals Compelled to tell in truthful words not wrap it up in florals I liken self to those who laugh with honesty and humour Alas we've found corruptive seed that's brewing like a tumour An evil weed that sprouts and shouts to those, below, before him Requires no polish 'pparently yet wants us to adore Him And if we don't he'll drop kick us dismissive yet obtrusive Revenge reviews are wearing thin validity elusive Which don't sit well with some of us we're here for honest writing And honest praise when it is due and DUE to what's delighting But...LOOK It IS the job in bringing up critique when you're reviewing Though with the right amount of tact respect the job you're doing Well... I've exercised a mound of tact the most I'll fucking muster But DON'T you tell me how to read and rate your poems BUSTER! I have the brains to comprehend and finish every sentence My point of view is NOT a sin so I won't ask repentence With no religion to my name I'll say as I'm upstanding "Do unto others as they've done..." A simple understanding We authors here have equal rights to post just what we're feeling But touting words like Lord Supreme can leave your readers reeling I'm just a gal who likes good verse yet NOT against religion But if you post, let ME decide on how I'll voice opinion Yes, you may trill from highest peak as though your language golden Well sorry pal, that water's sour - Divine? Nope, that ain't holdin' I have no cult, extremist views just poetry in motion No member bucks to prop me up in full-front-page-promotion Vernacular as rough as guts But I'm not one to worry 'Cos there are plenty on my boat that WON'T jump in a hurry I just rely on what I write might be of basic merit Not stink FS with my BS expecting ALL to wear it The front page here, for all to see to mock, critique and savour It soon becomes apparent who's for rank, or who's for flavour Hey... Your words won't mean a single thing while talent's not abundant And member bucks I'll grab with glee in truth, till you're redundant! (C) |
Recognized |
If this gets me kicked off...sorry to my fans and friends.
I love you all...LOL, and hey at least I've gone out with a bang.
I just happen to be one of a bunch of disgruntled Fanstorians who take pride in writing from the heart
and not from the pocket of pith.
Personally, I've had a gutful.
Hopefully people around here can see sense and say what they mean and mean what they say.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
I'm ALL for poetic splendor...not incoherent drivel.
Sorry, just gotta make a call here on what I feel I have to stand up for.
I'm also speaking on behalf of the blatant misrepresentation of the English speaking language. Not to mention incomplete sentences.
BTW...52c is ALL you're getting out of me...I'll let my POST do the talking as opposed to any depth of pocket.
Honestly, if this is a bad call on my behalf I'd appreciate the heads up. Willing to take ALL critique...good, bad and of course UGGGGLY.
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