| General Fiction posted January 29, 2014 |
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A little girl misses her Daddy.
I want my family together
by Jackarrie
I am happy now, because my Mamma is so happy to be with Javier, they are getting married. I am going to be the flower girl, with a lovely long dress, and I will be wearing flowers in my hair. You see my hair is long, it is past my shoulders, but one day it will be down past my waist, I am never going to get it cut, I don't care what Mamma says.
I don't cry any more now that I am five years old. When I was two, my Daddy left us, and Mamma cried every night, she did not think I could hear her. We got our new apartment and little Kitty, my kitten.
Do you know my nana; she came to stay a whole summer. I was happy because I love my nana. She is funny when she looks over her glasses at me. She gives me lots of hugs and kisses. I was very sad when nana had to go home to her own country. She talks to me on the telephone, and sings lovely songs for me. Sometimes they are funny,one about the laughing policeman is my favourite.
Mamma does not cry at night anymore. She is excited about getting married to Javier. I like Javier a lot, but I love my Daddy. You know Daddy talks to me on the telephone too. He says he loves me very much, but he lives too far away to visit me.
My Mamma has to work real hard to get money for us to have nice food and dresses to wear. I know my ballet classes, the shoes and everything costs a lot of money. She works in a lovely shop, it is a delicatesomething, and they sell gorgeous food. Some days Mamma brings home the lovely food, I don't always like it, but I eat it because if I don't, I won't get the lovely dessert.
My new friend is Florie, she is Javier's daughter. I like her a lot, she is six. Today Mamma is bringing Florie and me to get fitted for our dresses for the wedding. Florie will be a flower girl with flowers in her hair. If we are good she is going to bring us to McDonalds after. Mamma said that after they get married Florie will be my sister; but only a half a sister. I think that is so cool.
You know my Daddy won't be coming to the wedding, because his girlfriend had a new baby boy. They do live verrrry far away.
At night I say a prayer to God, "Please God can I have all my family together for one day, especially my Daddy and my new baby brother".
I am going to have to go now, my hair needs brushing and it hurts. I don't cry because then Mamma would get it cut and I would really hate that. Byeeeee.
Through the eyes of a child writing prompt entry
I am happy now, because my Mamma is so happy to be with Javier, they are getting married. I am going to be the flower girl, with a lovely long dress, and I will be wearing flowers in my hair. You see my hair is long, it is past my shoulders, but one day it will be down past my waist, I am never going to get it cut, I don't care what Mamma says.
I don't cry any more now that I am five years old. When I was two, my Daddy left us, and Mamma cried every night, she did not think I could hear her. We got our new apartment and little Kitty, my kitten.
Do you know my nana; she came to stay a whole summer. I was happy because I love my nana. She is funny when she looks over her glasses at me. She gives me lots of hugs and kisses. I was very sad when nana had to go home to her own country. She talks to me on the telephone, and sings lovely songs for me. Sometimes they are funny,one about the laughing policeman is my favourite.
Mamma does not cry at night anymore. She is excited about getting married to Javier. I like Javier a lot, but I love my Daddy. You know Daddy talks to me on the telephone too. He says he loves me very much, but he lives too far away to visit me.
My Mamma has to work real hard to get money for us to have nice food and dresses to wear. I know my ballet classes, the shoes and everything costs a lot of money. She works in a lovely shop, it is a delicatesomething, and they sell gorgeous food. Some days Mamma brings home the lovely food, I don't always like it, but I eat it because if I don't, I won't get the lovely dessert.
My new friend is Florie, she is Javier's daughter. I like her a lot, she is six. Today Mamma is bringing Florie and me to get fitted for our dresses for the wedding. Florie will be a flower girl with flowers in her hair. If we are good she is going to bring us to McDonalds after. Mamma said that after they get married Florie will be my sister; but only a half a sister. I think that is so cool.
You know my Daddy won't be coming to the wedding, because his girlfriend had a new baby boy. They do live verrrry far away.
At night I say a prayer to God, "Please God can I have all my family together for one day, especially my Daddy and my new baby brother".
I am going to have to go now, my hair needs brushing and it hurts. I don't cry because then Mamma would get it cut and I would really hate that. Byeeeee.
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Writing Prompt Write a short story (100-500 words). The story must include a child's perspective of an object or situation. The story may be told from the viewpoint of the child, or an adult. |
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