War and History Poetry posted February 15, 2014 |
To veterans...everywhere
A Monumental Pain
by Marillion
They march up proudly, some with stunted gaits, but as the soldiers crowd the monuments, each has the statued gaze that demonstrates the truest rendering of consequence. Memorials enshrine the memories of fallen brothers; mud and blood; the Bomb, and trenched expressions hold the histories of tours in France, Korea, Vietnam; of oily skies above Iraqi sands; an Iwo Jima pillbox; Kabul streets; the kick of M-16s in calloused hands; and how a kill-shot echo re-repeats like metal in a shrapnel-studded mind. Conditioned trigger-fingers curl and twitch recalling how a Panzer tank would grind mechanically above a fox-hole ditch. The sounds and images survive the years in those who were, or just beyond, their teens when they were shipped, still wet behind the ears, to live or die in those horrific scenes. Relived in films, but rarely captured well, those recreated versions try, but fail to capture days, or weeks, or years in Hell for those who trudge the endless battle trail. No matter where, or when, or what the war, The continent, the climate, or terrain, a sense of brotherhood unlocks the door to every veteran's unspoken pain. |
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Quatrains in iambic pentameter
This is actually an older piece, written after a weekend in Washington, D.C. and visiting all of the monuments there. The former soldiers present, including two cousins and an uncle and my father, were all emotional, and one could see in their expressions that they were no longer present, but locked in memories of what they each went through in different campaigns.
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and 2 member cents. This is actually an older piece, written after a weekend in Washington, D.C. and visiting all of the monuments there. The former soldiers present, including two cousins and an uncle and my father, were all emotional, and one could see in their expressions that they were no longer present, but locked in memories of what they each went through in different campaigns.
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