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Little Traitor

by Debra White


She asked for a snack.
     I gave her a banana.
          She wanted candy.


So now she hates me.
     Says she's Nanny's baby girl.

Low blow Babe, low blow.

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Please write TWO 5-7-5 poems.

The first one (three lines) is a dastardly/selfish deed, and the second one (three lines) is a come-uppance (revenge/justice).

That's SIX LINES TOTAL of 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, then 5 syllables, THEN the same again, making a TOTAL OF SIX LINES, AND 34 SYLLABLES.

TITLE MUST NOT BE INCLUDED IN THE TEXT.

ABSOLUTELY NO, I MEAN, 'NO' 'AUTHOR NOTES' ALLOWED.

MAXIMUM PROMOTION WITH SITE CERTIFICATES, IS A 'REVIEWER REWARD' OF 42 CENTS, until after the result is announced.

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