General Poetry posted June 12, 2014


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2 septeolets

Rainbow in the Sun

by playinaround

Original post: (septolet)


Deserted -


Lifeless land
Sizzling sand
Silent buzzard
Feathered black

Lone wanderer
Staggers ahead
Already dead

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Bookend poem: (septolet)

Rainbow in the Sun -

rain drops
bring life

a pop-up book
of paradise

salvation
rainbows
how very nice











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