General Poetry posted June 21, 2014


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lune (the bee)

by LoannaLois

bee sees me and lands

likes perfume

he decides I'm lunch



Write a Lune writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Lune. A Lune is a condensed haiku. It has 5-3-5 syllables.

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This little critter just stung me this week. I'm allergic, so it was an interesting few hours.
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