General Poetry posted June 23, 2014


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The life of WV still rolling on the Ohio

haiku (huge coal barges)

by DALLAS01

huge coal barges
ply Ohio's arteries
transfusing energy

 



River haiku writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a haiku on the subject of a river.

17 syllables OR LESS
(Does NOT have to be 5-7-5 syllables)
3 lines (short/long/short)
Present tense
Two grammatically interconnected lines of concrete imagery in lines 1 and 2 or 2 and 3 and a satori (moment of insight) in lines 3 or 1
PLEASE ADHERE TO THE INTERCONNECTED LINES RULES. I DON'T WANT TO SEE THREE SEPARATE LINES.
No caps (except proper names, etc.)
Minimal punctuation
NO personification (attributing human qualities to animal or object)
Artwork allowed
Title like this: haiku (first line)

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Thanks to marlak25 for the art work
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