General Poetry posted July 27, 2014


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Freedom of surrendering. I'm not in charge.

Powerlessness

by DALLAS01

Backed
into corner
battle begins
bleeding tears-

On bended knees
surrender
God in charge.

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Septolet Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Septolet - a seven-line poem consisting of fourteen words broken into two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.
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