Spiritual Flash Fiction posted September 17, 2017 |
100 Word Story
The Big Bang
by michaelcahill
In the beginning, God gathered all the materials of creation together. He breathed upon them, causing an explosion of infinite proportions.
Each particle was sent on a journey with its own purpose. Life formed from the particles, making the Earth.
It began as simple forms evolving over the millennia until, as God had planned, his very image walked the Earth ... mankind.
Man had free will and sentience. He had knowledge of good and evil.
When man reached a certain awareness of love, a force recognized by Man as the Son of God appeared, offering redemption for those seeking forgiveness.
Amen
100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry
In the beginning, God gathered all the materials of creation together. He breathed upon them, causing an explosion of infinite proportions.
Each particle was sent on a journey with its own purpose. Life formed from the particles, making the Earth.
It began as simple forms evolving over the millennia until, as God had planned, his very image walked the Earth ... mankind.
Man had free will and sentience. He had knowledge of good and evil.
When man reached a certain awareness of love, a force recognized by Man as the Son of God appeared, offering redemption for those seeking forgiveness.
Amen
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