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Love takes two...always
Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
: Lover's Quarrel by JLR
Minute contest entry

Dare he reclaim her calm therein
dispel chagrin?
Or doth she break...
her heart soon ache?

Wouldst they reflect upon unsaid
thoughts each misread,
while stings persist
amid clinched fists?

A deep morass awaits this pair
unless they dare
embrace, renew
thus, fear subdue.

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Author Notes
The Minute Poem is a poem that follows the "8,4,4,4" syllable count structure. It usually has 3 stanzas that are exactly the same. So: 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.

A traditional Minute Poem has 12 lines total. It has 60 syllables. It is written in a strict iambic meter. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff. However, for this contest there is not a requirement to follow the iambic meter rhyme scheme only to have a rhyme and the proper syllable count...

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