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Tanka Collection
: Raging Rapid River by Gypsy Blue Rose
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since you left me,
my heart floats aimlessly
in raging rapid rivers
of silent tears rushing to God
for forgiveness and peace
 

 

Author Notes
Tanka is one of the oldest types of Japanese poetry. It begun in the Emperial Court, where lovers exchanged a tanka after a night of lovemaking. Modern tanka can be any subject.

Tanka in Japan, is 31 syllables in a 5/7/5/7/7 form, but in English is 31 syllables OR LESS in a short/long/short/long/long format.

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