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5/7/5/7/7 Tanka
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: Dripping Berry Juice by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
Dripping berry juice
over plum shade pulp paper
as she writes poems
     of yearning and moonless nights —
red drops of a broken heart
 



 

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Pulp is the major raw material used in papermaking; handmade paper is thicker than normal with the pulp more visible; you can add any color you want.

MODERN TANKA is a Japanese poetic form written in 31 syllables or less. The Japanese form is 5/7/5/7/7 but in English it's usually shorter than that due to the difference in Japanese and English syllables. The form was created 1,300 years ago in the Imperial Court where lovers would exchange tanka after a night together. With modern tanka you can write about any subject you chose. You may use poetic devices: personification, metaphor, alliteration, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Keep capitalization and punctuation to a minimum. No end rhymes. === click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules




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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus

     

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