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Thirty (hopefully) Poems for April
: On the Sour Side by Debra White

 
 
she was always
a bit
   on the sour side
 
Aunty Vera
 
bitching and moaning
about relatives
who had wronged her
or just
plain irritated
the life out of her
 
it made her happy
   the bitching
it made me happy
   the knowing it wasn’t me
doing the irritating
 
at her funeral
I listened
 
to the praise she received
from those she had bitched about
 
to the tone-deaf distant uncle
in the pew behind
raising his voice in
loud
   joyful
      discord
 
to Aunty Vera
   whispering inside my head
something about
a strangled cat
   being more tuneful.
 
it wasn’t until Uncle Tuneless
passed a tissue
over my shoulder
that I felt tears on my cheek
 
it wasn’t funny
   not one bit
 
but my God, it felt good to laugh
 
 

Author Notes
I'm late starting NaPoWriMo this year, but I hope to catch up and write 30 poems in April.

Today I am using the prompt for day 5 from napowrimo.net


Write a poem in which laughter comes at what might otherwise seem an inappropriate moment �??�?�¢?? or one that the poem invites the reader to think of as inappropriate.

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