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Yamato Uta Poem
2024 Japanese Poetry
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Why Am I Unlovable?
by Gypsy Blue Rose
words definitions and Yamato-Uta rules in my author notes
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you will never know
how much I love you
and how it hurts
to feel unlovable
go ahead,
pierce my heart
with your cold touch
and your ambivalence
even in my dreams
you vacillate to be my man
and seem to be incapable
to appreciate who I am
why am I so unlovable?
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Author Notes
vacillate = to waver in mind or opinion; be indecisive or irresolute
ambivalent = having mixed feelings or contradictory ideas about someone.
Yamato Uta is an unrhymed free verse type of Japanese poetry. The poem is not rhymed and it can be as long as you like. It was created by poets during Japan's Heian Period 700 century. As with all Japanese poetry, keep it as succinct as possible with word imagery, easy to visualize. You can write about any subject. "Yamato-Uta is composed of the many words born from people's hearts, as leaves grow from seeds". The people use these words dexterously to express their thoughts and feelings about what they see or hear." wikipedia
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem,
Gypsy
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