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a Visser sonnet
Spring Thaw by RodG
No Restrictions Poetry writing prompt entry

Come, Leo, let's enjoy the spring-like thaw

And take a walk around our neighborhood.

We'll see if trees withstood this winter's wrath,

Its winds so raw that brittle branches cracked.

Will green-leafed sprigs appear on limbs with flaws,

Or sprout from crevices in fissured wood?

What loss should scented florets not burst forth,

If blooms emerging wither and withdraw.



Although still hampered by slow-melting snow,

Impatient daffodils rise everywhere.

Green shoots peep up and wriggle toward the sun

While clustered peonies grow much too fast.

Do cloudless skies and air this warm deceive?

Please say that Spring’s begun, not sleeping still.



Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type to enter this poetry contest. Any subject.

Recognized

Author Notes
Artwork courtesy of Google images.

The Visser sonnet is like the Italian (Petrarchan) sonnet except that most of the rhymes are not at the end of lines but scattered internally. Fourteen lines of iambic pentameter.

     

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