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Two Lines Haiku (rules in author notes)
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: Mountains Move by Gypsy Blue Rose
Presentation and poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright @ 11/24/24

mountains move —

one small rock at a time

 

Author Notes
Modern Haiku The most common literary adaptation in English of haiku looks something like this: one to four lines, no strict syllable count but brief, and often with a long/short or short/long asymmetry. These poems too utilize a caesura. Images need not be taken from nature, though they may be and often are. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Here’s an example:
in the woodpile
the broken ax handle
haiku foundation modern haiku fuels

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Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. Presentation and poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright @ 11/24/24

     

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