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Martin Priwinkle was certainly no dummy...
Dummy by Dean Kuch
    100 Word Horror Contest Winner 

~Dummy~

 

Moving not a muscle, voices came,

from somewhere deep within his frame.

The ventriloquist soon wooed the crowd;

ensuing applause came fiercely loud...

~~~

 

When Martin Periwinkle was through;

house lights brightened, stage curtains drew,

remaining still, so motionless,

he'd given all, audience professed.

~~~

 

The owner came with, Congratulations,

bouquets of roses,  and salutations!

Near Martin's body — his dummy was lying,

painted face streaked — had it been crying?

~~~

 

He's dead, doc said, has been for days.

How he performed, I couldn't say.

Both men looked closely — ashen faces went slack—

at the tiny wooden hand in the dead man's back...

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Writing Prompt
The challenge is to write a poem that contains some form of horror or thriller. No more than 100 words.
100 Word Horror
Contest Winner

Recognized

Author Notes
**98 words**

Originally, ventriloquism was a religious practice. The name comes from the Latin for to speak from the stomach, i.e. venter (belly). The Greeks called this gastromancy. The noises produced by the stomach were thought to be the voices of departed spirits, who took up residence in the stomach of the ventriloquist. The ventriloquist would then interpret the sounds, as they were thought to be able to speak to the dead, as well as foretell the future. One of the earliest recorded group of prophets to utilize this technique was the Pythia, the priestess at the temple of Apollo in Delphi, who acted as the conduit for the Delphic Oracle.

In nearly every movie concerning ventriloquists, they are portrayed as schizophrenic, nefarious creeps with serious social problems. Where does this stereotype come from? The art itself goes back to necromancers, who would pretend to act as speakers for the dead for grieving family members who could pay up front. Many believed that ventriloquists were in league with the Devil and in the 18th century there was a formal scientific investigation in France to investigate how ventriloquism actually worked. After the alleged unholy alliance of ventriloquists was debunked, the art flourished throughout Europe and the U.S. from vaudeville to packed theaters.

The creepiest of all creepy mannequins are of course the ones that look like children. Why else would there be dozens of horror flicks with deranged ventriloquist's dummies, deranged dolls, and maniacal mannequins? We can in part thank Don Mancini and his cult-favorite Child's Play series for making us perpetually look over our shoulders for children of the devil.

Thanks for reading. Pleasant screams...

     

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