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: The rudderless ship by CD Richards
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I can't imagine going back in time

to live life as I did when I was young;

when failing to comply was called a crime

and blind obedience's praises sung.


Yet, some folk seem to need a guiding hand—

a father figure, showing them the way;

what's right or wrong, they cannot understand,

unless inscribed divinely onto clay.


Is forming one's own judgements mortal sin?

Don't brains exist so we can work it out?

A child needs their behaviours pencilled in;

an adult's one who's learned to deal with doubt.


Some Biblical advice for one who clings:

"When I grew up, I gave up childish things."


 

Author Notes
There is a much thrown-about argument in apologetics that basically says if one doesn't believe in an almighty being who dictates what is right and wrong, it's impossible to have a moral compass. Another way this belief is presented is that the non-believer is like a rudderless ship, thrashing about in stormy seas, with no sense of direction.

This is a nonsensical argument, and my little poem is a response to that claim.

Thanks for reading.

     

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