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Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
: Tasks Yet to do by JLR

God's tasks were assigned to me.
His Breathe of life was my start
God's tasks were assigned to me.

A mystery, my task you see,
It took me years to listen in.
His Breathe of life was my start.

So, trials and errors I partook,
but now I must do my part!
It took me years to listen in.

I did once have a running start
bent but surely not worn out,
now its time, I must do my part!


More goods days, sure to come
living large with borrowed days
Bent but surely not worn out!

Wondering, have I missed one?
God's tasks were assigned to me.
living large with borrowed days,
God's tasks were assigned to me!

 

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Author Notes
A-Pix This Challenge Entry -
Terzanelle
The Terzanelle is a poetry type which is a combination of the villanelle and the terza rima forms. It is a 19-line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets/tercets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the first triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is repeated, reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the center line of the next-to-the-last stanza which appears in the quatrain. The rhyme and refrain scheme for the triplets is as follows: 1. A
2. B
3. A

4. b
5. C
6. B

7. c
8. D
9. C

10. d
11. E
12. D

13. e
14. F
15. E

Ending Type 1:

16. f
17. A
18. F
19. A

     

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