Rubble
25 syllable poem4 total reviews
Comment from Eunice Amero
War is a sad thing. Especially when you know children have died no chance to have a life. It's so sad. Nice poem. Thank you for sharing. Good job and good luck
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
War is a sad thing. Especially when you know children have died no chance to have a life. It's so sad. Nice poem. Thank you for sharing. Good job and good luck
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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And again thanks for those 6 shining stars! zanya
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You are very welcome
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Gruesome as this is, it's a too accurate picture of war.Though it is all true, it breaks my heart, and, for me, claims first place in this contest. Good imagery here.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
Gruesome as this is, it's a too accurate picture of war.Though it is all true, it breaks my heart, and, for me, claims first place in this contest. Good imagery here.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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And thanks again for those 6 bright stars - such sadness in our world.zanya
Comment from Ramona Scarborough
So few words which say so much. The picture was perfect for what you wrote. Unfortunately, also, a current sad situation. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
Ramona
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
So few words which say so much. The picture was perfect for what you wrote. Unfortunately, also, a current sad situation. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
Ramona
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from jessizero
This is a horrific but true image expressed in only 25 syllables. Congratulations in accomplishing this. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
This is a horrific but true image expressed in only 25 syllables. Congratulations in accomplishing this. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thanks for sharing zanya