She Waits
25 Words contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is a lovely poem, for the question it raises, the hope it implies and the waiting for the return of innocence.
Beautiful in it's simplicity.
Good luck on your entry.
Have a nice evening.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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This is a lovely poem, for the question it raises, the hope it implies and the waiting for the return of innocence.
Beautiful in it's simplicity.
Good luck on your entry.
Have a nice evening.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Marienkiefer. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I saw this challenge and thought it would be tricky, getting exactly 25 words that fit together. You've done that here, and I think it's very creative that you let the picture write the story for you. Very well done.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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I saw this challenge and thought it would be tricky, getting exactly 25 words that fit together. You've done that here, and I think it's very creative that you let the picture write the story for you. Very well done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Pam. Yes, these short prompts are tricky sometimes. I really appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you like the piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the sentiment here as our children grow out of the belief in fairies and at Christmas all the magic returns and your daughter will revisit the fairies, especially if she has a child of her own, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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I loved the sentiment here as our children grow out of the belief in fairies and at Christmas all the magic returns and your daughter will revisit the fairies, especially if she has a child of her own, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Dolly. This is slightly outdated. My own granddaughter is already past this age, but I'm sure she will visit this with my great granddaughter. I dearly appreciate the kind review and stars. Thank you again.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Once the thrill is over, there is no return. There is no turning back. Once the truth is revealed, it takes a while to accept reality. Thank you for the awareness poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Once the thrill is over, there is no return. There is no turning back. Once the truth is revealed, it takes a while to accept reality. Thank you for the awareness poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Carolyn. Yes, I was thinking about going in that direction of never returning but went this way with it instead. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are welcome.