Apocalyptic Acrostic
Beware of the Signs of The End Times - Have We Arrived?13 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. Your writing is creative and descriptive. This is a nice
example if an Acrostic poem. The theme is a bit glum and timely, yet the message is a strong one. I hope your readers will take time and ponder it.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Your writing is creative and descriptive. This is a nice
example if an Acrostic poem. The theme is a bit glum and timely, yet the message is a strong one. I hope your readers will take time and ponder it.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and rating this work. Your feedback is well received and greatly appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, APOCOLYPTIC, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and drops eleven alliterative insights into the end of the world and the return of the Redeemer.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This acrostic poem, APOCOLYPTIC, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and drops eleven alliterative insights into the end of the world and the return of the Redeemer.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Bill. I always appreciate your reading, reviewing and rating of my work. Thanks for noting the alliteration and the end message of the coming of the Redeemer.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is very intriguing. I like the idea of your words that start with the same letter for each sentence. The explanation of each sentence is always appreciated.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Your poem is very intriguing. I like the idea of your words that start with the same letter for each sentence. The explanation of each sentence is always appreciated.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Rosemary. I appreciate your insightful review and kind remarks. Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating this work.
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well crafted Acrostic poem. All we have to do is go to the scriptures and see that all of these things were foretold. I have enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This was a well crafted Acrostic poem. All we have to do is go to the scriptures and see that all of these things were foretold. I have enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your insightful and kind remarks. Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating my work.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting and well written acrostic, which you have obviously put a lot of thought into in order to start every word in each line with the same letter. Suggestion: The font is very tiny, and hard to read against the orange background. It would help to have a paler background and a larger font. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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An interesting and well written acrostic, which you have obviously put a lot of thought into in order to start every word in each line with the same letter. Suggestion: The font is very tiny, and hard to read against the orange background. It would help to have a paler background and a larger font. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I appreciate the fact you recognized that I put a lot of work into this acrostic. Thanks for your insight and your suggestion that I make some changes to the appearance. Somehow my edits did not take. I will be editing again thanks to you!
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You are welcome. Glad to help.
Wendy
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You are welcome. Glad to help.
Wendy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written acrostic poem about the end times. If we read our Bible we can tell things seem to be lining up. You used very good descriptive words. I can't wait to see my Lord, Jesus Christ. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This is a very interesting and well written acrostic poem about the end times. If we read our Bible we can tell things seem to be lining up. You used very good descriptive words. I can't wait to see my Lord, Jesus Christ. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Teri. Yes, I really do believe we are in the last days; however, I'm sure that many who came before us thought the very same thing. All we can do is pray incessantly, meditate on the Holy Scriptures regularly, fast and confess our sins. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work once again.
Comment from royowen
What a brilliantly written acrostic, using the added poetic device of alliteration to great affect. You've done a magnificent job of this, and speak of the inevitable return of Christ to redeem the elect and enact judgement on the earth, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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What a brilliantly written acrostic, using the added poetic device of alliteration to great affect. You've done a magnificent job of this, and speak of the inevitable return of Christ to redeem the elect and enact judgement on the earth, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Hi, Roy. This was a bit challenging to write; however, I am glad I took the time to do some research. I appreciate your comment regarding my use of alliteration because it seems to give more emphasis to the words and the message overall. Thank you!
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your acrostic is full of clever alliteration and describes the Apocalyptic situation perfectly and I wish you luck with the contest, you excelled with the descriptions here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Your acrostic is full of clever alliteration and describes the Apocalyptic situation perfectly and I wish you luck with the contest, you excelled with the descriptions here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. Awesome! I appreciate your pinpointing and commenting on the usage of the alliteration aspect. This is the first time I have utilized it in this format and I believe it is impactful. Thanks for providing another thoughtful and encouraging review.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
These are the days I was hoping to never see. Before, my grandmother died in 1960, I was seven. The things taking place were the things she warned me about. As a child, I was afraid. Not no more. This world is a wicked place. I do not want to die, however, I want to go natural. Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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These are the days I was hoping to never see. Before, my grandmother died in 1960, I was seven. The things taking place were the things she warned me about. As a child, I was afraid. Not no more. This world is a wicked place. I do not want to die, however, I want to go natural. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Carolyn. This really was not difficult to write because so much drama is unfolding before us in so many ways. It appears your grandmother was very insightful and may have had prophetic gifts. Thanks for sharing your story and kind remarks.
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Thank you, she held prayer meetings at her house every Sunday. And cooked for them. She was a wonderful person.
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Thanks for sharing your story of your grandmother. She left you with such vivid memories.
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You are welcome. Thank you for listening.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much, the13thpoet. Your review and thoughtful remarks are appreciated. Thanks for taking time to read and review my work.