Morning Walk
A trinet poem7 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
You have plenty alliterations going on in here, but it all works together. Good visual imagery created. Clearly written. Nice. Good work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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You have plenty alliterations going on in here, but it all works together. Good visual imagery created. Clearly written. Nice. Good work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated
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Comment from JLR
Technically spot on! Poet, constructing a Trinet to deliver with a strong poetic feeling is not an easy feat. You have delivered a worthy entry to the contest, and I wish you the very best in all future writings.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Technically spot on! Poet, constructing a Trinet to deliver with a strong poetic feeling is not an easy feat. You have delivered a worthy entry to the contest, and I wish you the very best in all future writings.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Comment from Sarah Tummey
Lovely. Not only have you described your morning walk, but with one line ("Leaves crunching"), you tell me it's autumn. I liked "Golden glow from the rising sun" too.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Lovely. Not only have you described your morning walk, but with one line ("Leaves crunching"), you tell me it's autumn. I liked "Golden glow from the rising sun" too.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Comment from lyenochka
Sounds like a wonderful way to start the day! I find walking a great time to pray and like your poem says "Solitude in the midst of nature" - really refreshes the soul. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Sounds like a wonderful way to start the day! I find walking a great time to pray and like your poem says "Solitude in the midst of nature" - really refreshes the soul. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
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Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Author,
Thanks for teaching the Trinet. I enjoyed your poem, "Morning Walk". When I was young, in my late twenties, I used to get up very early and go for a morning jog with the pastor of our church. Pastor Win would have been in his early thirties at the time. It was spring, and mornings were cool. But the birds were chirping. The sun was rising. Gravel crunching under old sneakers. And yes, soul refreshed with sleep still in our eyes. "Solitude in the midst of nature"... well, it was nice to share those special times with Win. He baptized me when I was 25 years old.
Early morning is a special time of the day. It's still in the diaper stage!
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Hi Mystery Author,
Thanks for teaching the Trinet. I enjoyed your poem, "Morning Walk". When I was young, in my late twenties, I used to get up very early and go for a morning jog with the pastor of our church. Pastor Win would have been in his early thirties at the time. It was spring, and mornings were cool. But the birds were chirping. The sun was rising. Gravel crunching under old sneakers. And yes, soul refreshed with sleep still in our eyes. "Solitude in the midst of nature"... well, it was nice to share those special times with Win. He baptized me when I was 25 years old.
Early morning is a special time of the day. It's still in the diaper stage!
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review. What wonderful memories ..thanks for sharing them with me.
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Comment from LisaMay
Your words and choice of illustration paint a lovely moment of private reflection while out for a solo morning walk. You set the scene effectively so the reader can enjoy what there is to see and hear as well, while not interrupting your own peacefully refreshing solitude.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Your words and choice of illustration paint a lovely moment of private reflection while out for a solo morning walk. You set the scene effectively so the reader can enjoy what there is to see and hear as well, while not interrupting your own peacefully refreshing solitude.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review. It is greatly appreciated
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Comment from jusylee72
Interesting and fun walking and observing nature. I enjoyed the picture and the sentiment of your poem. It is comforting. When we walk we need to be there and observe too often we only think about where we are going not what we are seeing. and hearing( Leaves Crunch) ENjoyed
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Interesting and fun walking and observing nature. I enjoyed the picture and the sentiment of your poem. It is comforting. When we walk we need to be there and observe too often we only think about where we are going not what we are seeing. and hearing( Leaves Crunch) ENjoyed
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
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