Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very sweet and well written 50 word fiction story you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 02-May-2022

Thank you!

Comment from JoannaN

Excellent

This is so cute. A little story with love and harmony at the heart of it. The picture fits well with your work. I wish you good luck on your contest.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Thank you! I hope that I win. Thank you for the encouragement!

reply by JoannaN on 29-Apr-2022

I wish you all the best :)

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

A very cute story. I could easily relate to it as I have a 13yr old son. We would do a lot of things together too. Very well written. All the best in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Good entry for the contest, sticking to such few words, yet telling a story. The way a child treats his mother shows his love as much as the words that he says.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Thank you!

reply by Anne Johnston on 29-Apr-2022

You are welcome