No Escape
Might one die during a dream?3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Yikes! Now THAT's a horrible death!
Your imagery is fantastic: "gossamer web," "golden orb," "blue-headed fly." I like your style of writing a lot. Good luck with the contest. (Do they give awards posthumously, though?!)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Yikes! Now THAT's a horrible death!
Your imagery is fantastic: "gossamer web," "golden orb," "blue-headed fly." I like your style of writing a lot. Good luck with the contest. (Do they give awards posthumously, though?!)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Not sure, but it would be nice to be noted in an obituary. Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great response to the prompt. With the metaphor of the spider web, for me, you conveyed the inevitability of death that, perhaps, comes upon us like a dream. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Great response to the prompt. With the metaphor of the spider web, for me, you conveyed the inevitability of death that, perhaps, comes upon us like a dream. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
The ending is both tragic and hilariously stated. "Nevertheless, I died."
Really, no need to mince words when you have only 100 to use.
This is a creative piece for the 100-word flash.
Take care,
Erika
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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The ending is both tragic and hilariously stated. "Nevertheless, I died."
Really, no need to mince words when you have only 100 to use.
This is a creative piece for the 100-word flash.
Take care,
Erika
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.