Worldly Woes
100 words7 total reviews
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Nice piece with an unexpected little payoff at the end as all good flash fiction does. I hope you do well in the contest with your imaginative entry. Good luck.
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Nice piece with an unexpected little payoff at the end as all good flash fiction does. I hope you do well in the contest with your imaginative entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash writing prompt contest about the man in the moon...very lonely.
Good word count and with nice presentation. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash writing prompt contest about the man in the moon...very lonely.
Good word count and with nice presentation. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I do not know if you will win this contest, but I have to tell you that I found this is imaginative and creative and very different.
I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes
Mary
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I do not know if you will win this contest, but I have to tell you that I found this is imaginative and creative and very different.
I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhh, you got me good!! I had absolutely no idea that this was the ending. Clever, innovative and extremely well written. Misleading your readers is definitely a talent you possess. Good luck in this contest!!
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Ohhh, you got me good!! I had absolutely no idea that this was the ending. Clever, innovative and extremely well written. Misleading your readers is definitely a talent you possess. Good luck in this contest!!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a cute story with a surprise twist at the end. You have done a marvelous job with the writing prompt. The artwork is perfect for the writ ing too. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
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This is a cute story with a surprise twist at the end. You have done a marvelous job with the writing prompt. The artwork is perfect for the writ ing too. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and story to go with it.
-I like how you personalize the Man in the Moon.
-A good hook at the beginning,
followed by a good descriptive paragraph showing
why he felt that way.
-A good question that worried him, but he
had a "nice memory."
-I like the conclusion with his "crater cottage."
-A good entry; good luck.
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-Nice image and story to go with it.
-I like how you personalize the Man in the Moon.
-A good hook at the beginning,
followed by a good descriptive paragraph showing
why he felt that way.
-A good question that worried him, but he
had a "nice memory."
-I like the conclusion with his "crater cottage."
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
Comment from jessizero
This made me feel so lonely, as your man in the moon must have felt. You did a great job in just 100 words. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
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This made me feel so lonely, as your man in the moon must have felt. You did a great job in just 100 words. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022