Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Interesting way to tell a story about a name that is used all the time when you cannot identify someone. The pace was quick but steady. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2023

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 50 Word Story writing prompt contest.

The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable. And the characters seem real. I would you recommend it.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a scary write as someone has been abandoned on a dump site, your words are chilling and this sounds like a murder investigation will soon be started, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I wasn't sure if John Doe was a man or an animal at first, but I'm assuming a man since you said "person." You told the story well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023

Comment from Thesis

Excellent

Nicely done. A good piece of Flash Fiction that told a full story with few words. This one makes you think of who the person was, and how he came to rest in this place. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023