Me to Me
I'm not what you think.7 total reviews
Comment from mrsmajor
Hello, Nicki,
You gave us an example of an illness that is feared, but calls for a great deal of special care and concern, certainly not the kind of care that was given...Your prose poem, was well written, word usage and rhyme well chosen...I wish you well in the prompt.
All the best!
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Hello, Nicki,
You gave us an example of an illness that is feared, but calls for a great deal of special care and concern, certainly not the kind of care that was given...Your prose poem, was well written, word usage and rhyme well chosen...I wish you well in the prompt.
All the best!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the six star review and sensitive regard for such a vulnerable population.
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It was my pleasure...Take Care!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is the first that seemingly meets the requirements. Well done.
Everything chosen makes it easier to read. Font size and type and spacing. This should score well.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This is the first that seemingly meets the requirements. Well done.
Everything chosen makes it easier to read. Font size and type and spacing. This should score well.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reviewing, Tom, and your encouraging words.
Comment from strandregs
I just released my contribution to the topic. Somewhat.
It's good to bring the subject to awareness of the pizza eater.
And beer guzzler.
Abraham Hopper said B3 can help.
Then I learned it is a precursor for NAD+
Everything is connected. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I just released my contribution to the topic. Somewhat.
It's good to bring the subject to awareness of the pizza eater.
And beer guzzler.
Abraham Hopper said B3 can help.
Then I learned it is a precursor for NAD+
Everything is connected. :-))Z.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Connected, Indeed! THanks for the review!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I like the way your text was rhymed. Poetic prose I have often seen it called. This in itself is often one example of an effect that happens during a psychotic outburst, that you managed very well. kay
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I like the way your text was rhymed. Poetic prose I have often seen it called. This in itself is often one example of an effect that happens during a psychotic outburst, that you managed very well. kay
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Kay, for reviewing it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is awful, how very sad this situation is and your well rhymed poem is powerful and dramatic and I felt for this poor girl suffering like this, this is an epic write for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Oh my goodness this is awful, how very sad this situation is and your well rhymed poem is powerful and dramatic and I felt for this poor girl suffering like this, this is an epic write for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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It is incredibly sad. I hope my little poem gives it a voice. Thanks for reviewing it.
Comment from royowen
I admire you for being able to see through the eyes of someone who has, or is, mentally unbalanced, I think we are all a little insane, and understand, but there's a protective barrier in the form of understanding a sense of sane reality. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I admire you for being able to see through the eyes of someone who has, or is, mentally unbalanced, I think we are all a little insane, and understand, but there's a protective barrier in the form of understanding a sense of sane reality. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate those kind words.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Not only have you successfully written about the tragedy of mental illness and what it must feel like to the person inflicted, but you have done to perfect verse. I wish I had six stars to give you.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Not only have you successfully written about the tragedy of mental illness and what it must feel like to the person inflicted, but you have done to perfect verse. I wish I had six stars to give you.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you for those kind words!