Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

You have a typo in the title. I wanted to tell you quickly. Otherwise...

This is an excellent poem for competition. That is from one of my favorite movies too. I love that line.

You have a very special relationship. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you, I do have a spelling problem. Thanks for the read and feedback.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 10-Aug-2023

We all do!

Comment from Amber Mathis

Excellent

I think the title of this entry was supposed to be "you complete me" not "you compete me", like they are in a competition. It's an easy fix. It's a great poem and I see that you followed the rules for non-use words pretty well. I wish you luck in the competition. - Amber :)

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for the catch. I guess I can't read or spell. Appreciated your read and feedback.

reply by Amber Mathis on 10-Aug-2023

You can read and spell. I wasn?t meaning that. Little mistakes are so easy to make. Keep your head up. I wish you luck in the competition. - Amber :)

reply by Amber Mathis on 10-Aug-2023

You can read and spell. I wasn?t meaning that. Little mistakes are so easy to make. Keep your head up. I wish you luck in the competition. - Amber :)

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

I need to proofread better. Thanks for the encouragement.