Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Ha! I initially did salvation then I saw yours and did not want to step on your toes. Besides, yours was better than mine ;)

Great job here. We shall meet upon the field of verbal warfare and engage in the dance of poetic battle! (Too much? Yeah, I do not think so either!)

Nice!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024

Apologies, Douglas, and thank you. Let?s call a poetic truce for the moment. Cheers, Terry.

reply by Douglas Goff on 16-Mar-2024

Ha! No apologies necessary. You are a talent!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I don't think this is a clumsy attempt at all. I like the way that your acrostic has a regular flow with a rhyming pattern which so often gets forgotten with this kind of format. Your theme is also perfect for the Bible prompt. Just one suggestion: No one who keep(s) the Lord's Commandments... Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024

Reassurance welcomed. Thank you. Terry.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

"His" and "He" when referring to God should be capitalized. Other than that, this was a great entry for the "Bible acrostic" prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024

Quite right. Many thanks. Cheers, Terry.